Devan staggered around the forest, fear gripping his soul. Heart pounding like elephants stomping.
Screams of despair flew out of his mouth, petrified shivers slid down Devan's spine. He stared up into the blinding sunlight. Light knifed through the leaves sending arms all over random places as he traveled, downcast and lost. Water dripped from his eyes. Devan stood stone cold, glaring around. There was no sign of life, suddenly the sun started descending.
I am learning to use sentences starting with different parts of speech.
I am learning this to create more impact.
What I want to learn next is theme.